Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Library Patron and Staff Sestina Contest

What's involved: write a sestina exploring the theme of change/rebirth/resurrection/tranformation/metamorphosis (for Spring!) and then post it in the comments section of this entry (you will need a Blogger account). The deadline for entries is Sunday, May 31, 2009, after which our fair and impartial judge will select winners- who will be notified via Blogger within one week. Prizes include Esteban's and Kolache Factory gift certificates!

I hear you thinking "Ok, sounds fun- but what the heck is a sestina?" Well, that is the fun part- it's only just about the most complicated poetry form in the English language....

A sestina (also, sextina, sestine, or sextain) is a highly structured poem consisting of six six-line stanzas followed by a tercet (called its envoy or tornada), for a total of thirty-nine lines. The same set of six words ends the lines of each of the six-line stanzas, but in a different order each time; if we number the first stanza's lines 123456, then the words ending the second stanza's lines appear in the order 615243, then 364125, then 532614, then 451362, and finally 246531. This organization is referred to as retrogradatio cruciata ("retrograde cross"). These six words then appear in the tercet as well, with the tercet's first line usually containing 1 and 2, its second 3 and 4, and its third 5 and 6 (but other versions exist, described below). English sestinas are usually written in iambic pentameter or another decasyllabic meter. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sestina)

more information:
from the Academy of American Poets

Humorous sestinas from McSweeney's Internet Tendency

and finally, an example:

Sestina of the Tramp-Royal
by Rudyard Kipling
First published in The Seven Seas (1896).


Speakin' in general, I 'ave tried 'em all,
The 'appy roads that take you o'er the world.
Speakin' in general, I 'ave found them good
For such as cannot use one bed too long,
But must get 'ence, the same as I 'ave done,
An' go observin' matters till they die.

What do it matter where or 'ow we die,
So long as we've our 'ealth to watch it all —
The different ways that different things are done,
An' men an' women lovin' in this world —
Takin' our chances as they come along,
An' when they ain't, pretendin' they are good?

In cash or credit — no, it aren't no good;
You 'ave to 'ave the 'abit or you'd die,
Unless you lived your life but one day long,
Nor didn't prophesy nor fret at all,
But drew your tucker some'ow from the world,
An' never bothered what you might ha' done.

But, Gawd, what things are they I 'aven't done?
I've turned my 'and to most, an' turned it good,
In various situations round the world —
For 'im that doth not work must surely die;
But that's no reason man should labour all
'Is life on one same shift; life's none so long.

Therefore, from job to job I've moved along.
Pay couldn't 'old me when my time was done,
For something in my 'ead upset me all,
Till I 'ad dropped whatever 'twas for good,
An', out at sea, be'eld the dock-lights die,
An' met my mate — the wind that tramps the world!

It's like a book, I think, this bloomin' world,
Which you can read and care for just so long,
But presently you feel that you will die
Unless you get the page you're readin' done,
An' turn another — likely not so good;
But what you're after is to turn 'em all.

Gawd bless this world! Whatever she 'ath done —
Excep' when awful long — I've found it good.
So write, before I die, "'E liked it all!"

(This work is in the public domain in the United States because it was was published before January 1, 1923)

5 comments:

  1. A Kristina Sestina

    Darkness around me unstructured free rhyme
    No. More like random words- not a poem
    Sadness and teardrops white zinfandel wine
    Melancholy me- I could use a friend
    Like the ones I lost in another time
    Tripping on a chance, I met Kristina

    Little interest at first in Kristina
    Kind of like words in a doggerel rhyme
    Together- but they’re not quite a poem
    She winks at me “Zin should be a red wine”
    Tells me she’s not sure she needs a new friend
    But that she’ll sit for a smileful of time

    A smile, becomes two, then three smiles of time
    Things becoming less grey with Kristina
    Brightening a bit like a haiku rhyme
    Only five lines tis true- still a poem
    One that goes well with a fine shiraz wine
    Could it be that I now have a new friend?

    She never said it, but what is a friend?
    Certainly someone who gives you some time
    Becoming someone like that- Kristina
    Like a comfortable four lining rhyme
    Dancing light through your day- a new poem
    Sunshine peeking out and good merlot wine

    Cabernet sauvignon deep fine rich wine
    Conversations for two with a good friend
    Dancing and birthdays and going out time
    Seeing a warm spring play with Kristina
    Shakespeare’s in the park- with fine sonnet rhyme
    We match him, we two, with our own poem

    A banner bright sun twined sunlight fine poem
    Complex and deep a Bordeaux aged wine
    Tripping on a chance I find a best friend
    Dark fading now to a bright summertime
    A friendship laughing-built with Kristina
    Smiling, winking, tis a sestina rhyme.

    A summer time, a sestina poem
    A smiling rhyme, a very bestest friend
    A crystaled wine- here’s to you Kristina.

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  2. Okay, re-checking the directions, I see I got line order wrong. So when you say "other versions exist" does it means I can re-arrange line order? Judges, does this one work or do I have to do a complete re-write?

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  3. I think this works! Thank you for participating- "sit for a smileful of time" is a great image

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  4. Butterfly Sestina

    They would be almost dry by now, my wings-
    you would lure me in with colored water
    i would lead you in circles through the mist
    From the road they might think they saw a shine
    Of something, something metal, or maybe
    only a puddle reflecting the moon

    we consider her together, the moon
    i move aside, you stroke powder from my wings
    i remind you what that does, but maybe
    we're way too far past the deepest water
    i'm not sure what it means when your eyes shine
    i'm not sure what i did to cause that mist

    between us swirls a thick column of mist
    i see my mother, or maybe the moon
    and when i look now it's your teeth that shine
    and rougher and faster you stroke my wings
    rougher and faster we part the water
    now it's a different kind of maybe

    now it's the very worst kind of maybe
    now it's the very darkest kind of mist
    now we're over the bottomless water
    i thought i had an ally in the moon
    i thought i had a blessing in the wings
    i thought it was a blessed thing to shine

    i thought i could dance the rainbow, i'd shine
    all the way back down to the church, maybe
    i convinced myself they were angel wings
    i'm an angel special-born to the mist
    i shouldn't have told you i kissed the moon
    i shouldn't have brought you near the water

    but now i know why we're here at the water
    now i know why i'm allowed, compelled, to shine
    i can grab the attention of the moon
    my mother- the moon-the water- maybe
    there is a rescue from you in the mist
    maybe you've left life enough in my wings

    but love me- i'll soak these wings in water
    foundered in mist, i will feast on your shine
    maybe i wouldn't miss kissing the moon

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  5. Unicorn Hall is the winner!!! Please email your mailing address to jenny.brewer@leaguecitylibrary.org to recieve your prize and certificate!

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